In progress Shiz / Help / Crit Thread

So you're slaving away on a piece, and we all hit a point where we go, "Uhhh, where is this going, I can't tell if its good, fugg, HELP ME!"

Post works in progress, stucks, and works you're "finished" with and you're not sure what to do. Please be constructive, saying "I like it" isn't constructive. No flaming, remember, they're critiquing your WORK not YOU!

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Permalink Reply by Byron Fuckyourself on February 29, 2008 at 1:25am: Here is something I have been thinking of doing for ages, but not have mustered the courage nor had the physical ability (until I heal up from surgery) of doing. I have want to go Special Forces aka Green Berets. The few delemas I am facing are, #1- If I do make it through, I will be gone alot. Deployments are there game and saving the world is there name. I have ran the idea by the wife and she is not to thrilled about but would support me 100%. #2- Do I have what it takes? I know the easy answer is you wouldnt know if you dont give it the ole college try. But I dont want to commit myself to something that would be a waist of mine and the armys time. Help me Dr. Erica, what should I do???; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Jesse Cowell on March 1, 2008 at 12:01am: www.drawnbypain.com

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Permalink Reply by Erica Langworthy on March 5, 2008 at 10:36am: Hmmmm Dr. Erica sez:

Hmmmmm, Green Berets are no damn joke, wasn't Jesse the Body a Green Beret? It's not an easy thing to consider. I dunno much about the unit other than they seem to steamroll everyone in their way and succeed. Though thinking of your wife and possible consequences it could have are smart and shows ya care about her and her future with you. Not an easy call for me either. I'm pretty sure you have what it takes. As dumb as it sounds, maybe list the pros and cons and see which list is longer?

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Permalink Reply by Aaron on March 9, 2008 at 9:41pm: I like this thread, Cool idea Erica. I will post something up here for opinions and stuff. I just feel like my work is sloppy. But I will let you guys tell me what you think.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by DarKsidE555 on May 14, 2008 at 5:51am: Baah, I'm currently stuck on a new song. More or less to say I'm facing a little block lately. I got the main riff/idea down but I'm not quite sure if I should keep it in the more "aggressive" mood or switch to a more melodical playing.

If anyone is interested in hearing a first sample of it, go here...

www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/139159

Feedback is certainly appreciated! Thanks! :); ▶ Reply to This